在表达相互平行的概念时,要使用相同的语法结构,摆平平行结构是高考短文改错中出现频率较高的考查形式。
●难点磁场
1.()asweclimbedthemountain,wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.
80.________(nmetXX)
2.()irememberedherwordsandcalmdown.
93.________(nmetXX)
3.()iwillspendthewholeweekendreadingandprepareforit.
86.________(XX春季)
4.()playingfootballnotonlymakesusgrowuptallandstrongbutalsogiveusasenseoffairplayandteamspirit. 90.________
5.()modernpeopleknowmoreabouthealth,havebetterfindandtoliveincleanersurroundings. 84.________
●案例探究
1.itwasverykindofthemtomeetmeattherailwaystationanddrovemetotheirhome.
(nmeti996)
解析:此题为五星级题。drove改成drive。因为tomeet…andtodrive是平行结构,同时在句中作主语。drive可以视为省略了to。
e.g.itisdifficultforhimtospeakenglishandcommunicatewithothersinenglish.
2.toanswercorrectlyismoreimportantthanfinishquickly.
解析:此题为五星级题。在finish前加to。tofinishquickly与toanswerquickly是不定式的平行结构。
e.g.tosayiseasierthantodo.
3.inmanyways,ridingabicycleisasimilartodriveacar.
解析:此题为四星级题。drive改为driving,riding与driving为动名词的平行结构。
4.psychologytodayisinteresting;informativeandeasilytoread.
解析:此题为五星级题。easily改为easy.interesting,informativeandeasy为形容词的平行结构。
e.g.wemustsolvethisprobleminacorrectandfriendlyway.
5.notonlydoreadersfindthebookuseful,italsohelpedjiangtolearnmore.
解析:此题为五星级题。do改为did。因为notonly…butalso…连接两个平行结构find和help,都为过去时态。notonly置与句首,应该倒装,借助于助动词did。
●锦囊妙计
常考虑:
1.动词与动词平行、形容词与形容词平行、分词与分词平行、不定式与不定式平行、短语与短语平行。
2.平行结构经常借助于并列连词and,but,or或连词词组notonly…butalso…,not…but…,either…or…,neither…nor…,aswellas等。
●歼灭难点训练
1.()theindiansofthesouthwesternunitedstatesarefamousfortheirbeautifulartwork,especiallyhandmadejewelrycastinsilver,carvedoutofstones,ordecoratewithbeadsandfeathers.
2.()godowntotheshopandtobuyamouse-trap,butdon’ttellanyonewhatitisfor!
3.()she’sfamousnotonlyintheunitedstatesbutalsoonabroad.
4.()thefullpreparationsifyoumake,thesurerofsuccessyou’llcertainlybe.共
5.()aseeing-eyedogisaspecialdogthathelpsblindpeoplewalkalongthestreetsanddoingmanyotherthings.
6.()dayafterdayweseeitslightandfeelit’swarm.
7.()hesaiditwasbesttostayuntilhelparrivedratherthantogointotheforestandgetlost.
8.()charlesandlindamasondoallofthesethingsaswellasclimbedbuilding.
9.()michaelandjackwenttothesameschoolandthenthesameuniversity.
10.()inmanycountriespeopleputnoticesinnewspapersiftheyaretryingtogetinformationorfindingahouseandtheroomsthattheycanlivein…
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